Monday, 11 September 2017

WALT-Use repetitive language

Excuses

Sorry Miss...
I didn’t mean to break the window.
The sun was in my eyes.
The bat was surprisingly heavy.
and I swear I’m not telling lies.

Sorry Miss...
I swear I hit that tennis ball straight.
But a squawking seagull got in the way.
Making the ball go in the wrong direction.
And now I’m sorry you have to pay.

Sorry Miss...
But did you see the crazy weather.
The lightning struck the window.
Frightening everyone in the playground.
Causing it to shatter and glow.

Sorry Miss…
Pinch me cause I’m dreaming.
A dragon came to life today.
And burnt the window to a crisp
Boy, it must have been having a bad day.

Sorry Miss…
Harold the giraffe went on a rampage.
Meteors struck the school.
An airplane went off course
striking buildings before landing in the pool.

By Lujein, Sahar, Nikita, Amelia, Sebastian and Krish.

WALT- Describe a moment in time


WALT Describe a moment in time
  • Present tense
  • Describe what you think, see and feel
  • First person - I, we, my,
  • Descriptive language - adjectives, verbs, similes,
  • Range of sentence starters

“Pass the ball, over here!” I am to scared to even answer. “ They're Back!” Ben yelles. Once again we were running from the people who have already destroyed half of our village. I have one million thoughts bouncing through my head but the main one was that we are going to die. Running as fast as we can we are still one kilometer away from the village Jack said we shouldn’t run just hide in one of the trenches that we made when we were young. The only reason why he said that is because they have cars and tanks already on us. We got in the trench and hoped that our parents would be safe...      


WALT-Reading-create a poster of a Roald Dahal



Sunday, 20 August 2017

Make a DNA imovie


I like the way we had a loud voice.
Next time I should try to learn the words and say them properly.